analysis of previous students work

WWW: I think that the narrative is really well presented and was
thought in dept about in order to make it clear and understood.
They were creative and experimented with different shot types
which worked well for them. The pace of the shots were cut
accordingly to the pace of the song so i fitted well and didn't
look odd.

EBI: I think that they didn't put much thought into the lightening as
in some shots the lightening looked poor quality which impacted
there video overall. although they used a variety of different shots
they were a bit slack on them, their framing could of been improved.





WWW: I Think in this video you can definitely see that there miss
en scene was thought about and planned in detail which paid off
in their video as there locations were effective and creative which
fitted well within the video. also there costumes were really detailed
and made the video look professional.

EBI: i think because it was so clear they thought indept about their
mise en scene, it seems that there narrative was a bit confusing at
times and unclear, i also do not really get why they used certain
effects and what they wanted to gain from those effects.





WWW: I think that they narrative fitted really well with there chosen
 genre and their location and costumes highlighted the narrative well
i can see that they have used Andrew godwin theory when the lyrics
say about a gunshot. i also think they were creative with there effects.

EBI: i think they could have used a variety of different shot types
as they only really used a mid shot which look our attentions
else where. The performers were unclear as i think they
changed lead singers half way through. and i think they could
have focused more on their lip syncing





WWW: I think that the narrative was really well thought about
and creative. they used a variety of different shot types which
made the video a lot more interesting to watch. The narrative
also fitted well with the lyrics in the song.

EBI: i personally think there could of been a bit more
performance in the video, there was a lot of narrative which worked
well but we didn't see a lot of performance. i think they could of
improved there costumes making them a bit more creative and also
in some shots the lightening could have been focused on and improved.